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    Gregory Horror Show: Another World [Manga]

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    Re: Gregory Horror Show: Another World [Manga]

    Post by supercomputer276 on Sat Mar 10, 2012 1:56 am

    OK, from that I think I have a good localization for that line: "Why am I not surprised?!"

    With any luck, I should have the localization done by the end of the weekend.

    EDIT: Having trouble again with a line on pg. 133. Gregory says "He wants to play with living things with an innocent spirit," in reference to James. Also, the beetle's little balloon wasn't translated, so I just put it as "?!"
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    Re: Gregory Horror Show: Another World [Manga]

    Post by Becca-chan on Sat Mar 10, 2012 11:28 am

    I think the " He wants to play with things like an innocent spirit" more or less means that James just wants to play like any other child would.

    And here's the second attempt at re-scanning that page!
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    Hopefully this one's okay
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    Re: Gregory Horror Show: Another World [Manga]

    Post by supercomputer276 on Sat Mar 10, 2012 2:31 pm

    Unfortunately, that one seems just as tilted as the previous one, sorry...
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    Re: Gregory Horror Show: Another World [Manga]

    Post by Becca-chan on Sun Mar 11, 2012 3:42 pm

    Sorry ^^;; but I'm afraid it's the best I can do without breaking the book's spine...and I don't want to end up doing that
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    Re: Gregory Horror Show: Another World [Manga]

    Post by supercomputer276 on Sun Mar 11, 2012 5:10 pm

    But you managed to get it oriented correctly the first time you scanned it, way back when. Here's an idea: scan the entire two-page spread, then crop out the right page. Leave me to deal with any size issues like it being rather small.
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    Re: Gregory Horror Show: Another World [Manga]

    Post by Nilgiree on Mon Mar 12, 2012 6:02 am

    Go ahead and do what you like with the beetle's balloon. Honestly, most of the text there is too jumbled up for me to read;;;

    And for Gregory's quote, that was as strait forward as I could get. I think he's just explaining how James is at the age where he's curious about how living and death work out...? Sorry I can't help you much;;;
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    Re: Gregory Horror Show: Another World [Manga]

    Post by Becca-chan on Thu Mar 15, 2012 11:59 am

    Double Page Spread 140-141

    Okay, here's the re-scanned double spread page for you to edit, S.C
    I know it's probably not the best scan, but this was as best as I could do.

    Just to say that I haven't sized it down, so it'll be pretty huge.
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    Re: Gregory Horror Show: Another World [Manga]

    Post by supercomputer276 on Thu Mar 15, 2012 1:36 pm

    This entire situation has been upsetting me, because there's so much clashing between us and I'm afraid of looking unreasonable... Are you lining the book along the side of the scanner tray, Becca? I've photocopied manga before, and I'm having distinct trouble seeing how this lean keeps happening. Are scanners in England different from what I'm used to?

    Well I'll admit all these rescans did show a balloon of Tooru's we missed earlier, that was lost in the margins. Nil, think you can translate that one (bottom-right of the left page)?
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    Re: Gregory Horror Show: Another World [Manga]

    Post by Nilgiree on Fri Mar 16, 2012 4:36 am

    Tooru is saying 'why would-' in response to James wanting to play tag but is interrupted by Kimiko.
    And I'm assuming that I'll be cleaning up that page once we get a better scan of it?
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    Re: Gregory Horror Show: Another World [Manga]

    Post by Becca-chan on Wed Mar 21, 2012 5:59 pm

    @ S.C, Nilgiree - Sorry for the absence again guys, it's just that I've ended up getting sick again >.<

    @ S.C - You're lucky to have a scanner that big! my one's a flat top one that I've had for a few years.

    I have a feeling that I might of scanned the page differently to how I originally scanned it, although I keep making sure that it doesn't tilt.
    I'll try it again.

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    Re: Gregory Horror Show: Another World [Manga]

    Post by supercomputer276 on Thu Mar 22, 2012 12:11 am

    I'm sure you'll get it next time, Becca.

    @ Nil: Correct, or at least, I think that's the idea.
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    Re: Gregory Horror Show: Another World [Manga]

    Post by supercomputer276 on Thu Mar 22, 2012 2:10 am

    I've finished the chapter 7 localization! Here's the link to the Google Doc so you don't have to go fish for the last one:

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    Concerning Jame's lines on pg. 131-132, I'm open to edits if you think it doesn't reflect the original meaning, Nil.

    (Heh, "go fish.")
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    Re: Gregory Horror Show: Another World [Manga]

    Post by Becca-chan on Thu Mar 22, 2012 10:47 am

    Okay here we go, this is the latest re-scan of the page.
    Page 142 - rescan

    I made sure to try and trim any edges that made the page look off-kilter this time around...although I could only do so much, if I'd of done anymore, it would of cut off a speech bubble. ^^;

    One thing's for sure though, this is probably the first page I've had to work a lot on.
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    Re: Gregory Horror Show: Another World [Manga]

    Post by supercomputer276 on Thu Mar 22, 2012 1:32 pm

    PERFECT! Very Happy I couldn't ask for anything better! Excellent work! I knew you could do it!

    Now once you both approve the localization linked above and Nil gets the pages cleaned, we can get his chapter moving again. I'm quite eager to get to chapter 10 eventually, and I know one of the forum-goers around here is going to love chapter 9.
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    Re: Gregory Horror Show: Another World [Manga]

    Post by Becca-chan on Thu Mar 22, 2012 2:42 pm

    Heee~ Thank you!

    I read the localization earlier this morning and it's an A-ok from me! ^_^
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    Re: Gregory Horror Show: Another World [Manga]

    Post by Nilgiree on Fri Mar 23, 2012 10:54 pm

    Thanks Becca~ Here's the cleaned scan!
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    As for the localization, I'm fine with James's lines, but I have a problem with Kimiko calling Tooru 'Mr. Takenozuka.' They should be around the same age (or at least at this point of the plot), so to have them calling each other Mr. or Ms. sounds too stiff. I understand if we don't want to use '-kun,' but could we change it so it sounds more, I guess, friendly? It might be better if we just have them calling each other by their first names.
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    Re: Gregory Horror Show: Another World [Manga]

    Post by supercomputer276 on Fri Mar 23, 2012 11:11 pm

    Wait, that was "-kun?" Shoot, completely missed that, I thought that was "-san" or something since I wasn't paying attention. I've replaced the "Mr. Takenozuka" with "Tooru;" does that work better?

    (See, this is why I set the system up like this. Smile )
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    Re: Gregory Horror Show: Another World [Manga]

    Post by Nilgiree on Fri Mar 23, 2012 11:22 pm

    Yup! I'm completely fine with it now Smile
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    Re: Gregory Horror Show: Another World [Manga]

    Post by supercomputer276 on Fri Mar 23, 2012 11:30 pm

    Excellent. I'll be rather busy over my spring break next week, but I'll do what I can.
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    Re: Gregory Horror Show: Another World [Manga]

    Post by supercomputer276 on Mon May 14, 2012 1:50 am

    Sorry if I'm long overdue, but tonight is the night... of James. Chapter 7 text insertion version 1 is ready:

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    Once again, slight dialogue edits to fit into the balloons. Also, on the two-page spread, both Nil and I COMPLETELY MISSED one of James's balloons in the translation and localization. I ended up making something up based vaguely on the hallway's decoration (having figured out the pattern from James's other lines). A second version might be called for if Nil thinks it doesn't work, but after the long delay due to various other things in my life (plus my wanting to avoid putting horizontal text in vertical balloons again), I'd rather avoid that if at all possible.
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    Re: Gregory Horror Show: Another World [Manga]

    Post by Nilgiree on Mon May 14, 2012 3:31 am

    What you put in the missed ballon works out all right, so I think it's good to go Smile
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    Re: Gregory Horror Show: Another World [Manga]

    Post by Becca-chan on Tue May 15, 2012 6:07 pm

    The final version looks good, S.C!
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    Re: Gregory Horror Show: Another World [Manga]

    Post by supercomputer276 on Tue May 15, 2012 8:33 pm

    Excellent. I'll get the announcement topic updated right away.

    As to the next raw, the most I can say at present is "not this week." Finals this week, followed this weekend by hopefully finishing off one of my other projects I've left hanging before it starts becoming a problem. But don't worry, I'll be incorporating PAW into my summer project schedule, so with any luck, we should be done with the remaining four chapters by the end of the year!
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    Re: Gregory Horror Show: Another World [Manga]

    Post by Nilgiree on Wed May 16, 2012 7:18 am

    That's great! Don't worry about rushing, I can tell that you have a lot on your hands S.C.

    I should let you guys know before hand that from the middle of June my summer break is going to start, but this year I'm going on a trip to the US, and a visit to my Japanese grandparents' place right after that. I won't be able to use my main computer for at least a month. My trip is planned in July, so if we can work on this project in the later half of June, I should have plenty of time to for it and get things done fast Wink
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    Re: Gregory Horror Show: Another World [Manga]

    Post by supercomputer276 on Wed May 16, 2012 4:28 pm

    Well with any luck I should be able to get the next raw done by the end of May; there's still a couple weeks to get that done in. We'll see how it turns out.

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